A Bit of Confirmation from an Expert

Maybe itâs inevitable, when you read a lot of poetry criticism, to come across discussions of T. S. Eliot somewhere in the mix. And Hugh Kennerâs and Guy Davenportâs delicious expositions to the contrary, I still canât for the life of me understand why the guy remains such a towering poetâunless, of course, readers appreciate his obscurities as a means of proving their own intellectual or cultural superiority over loosey-goosey hoi polloi and their embrace of, say, William Stafford or Rupi Kaur.1
Be that as it may, I felt a weight lift off the olâ shoulders this morning while reading Michael Hamburgerâs fantastic The Truth of Poetry: Tensions in Modern Poetry from Baudelaire to the 1960s. His section on Eliot confirmed Iâve not been a complete hayseed in finding the poetâs work cold and purposefully inaccessible to messy human beings unable to get through the world without honoring both mental and emotional capacities, much less confiding in other messy human beings about emotion-laden troubles and joys. As part of a larger conversation on the identification, or not, of the poet with the person said poet is when not being a poet, Hamburger goes into Eliotâs donning in life and in his poetry an impersonal mask that âworked because it was not a literary or aesthetic doctrine, but a personal need. Renunciation and self-denial,â Hamburger says, âpervaded his work long before he found a religious justification for them.â2
It wasnât just that Eliot frowned upon poetry focused on the unique travails of a unique individual, even before the confessional poets blasted onto the scene at mid-century. Hamburger notes that âWhat was embarrassing to Eliot was that he had an individual personality susceptible to sufferings that were not shared by others, that were not even comprehensible to others, because they enjoyed and approved the things he abhorred.â That sense of alienation, Hamburger notes, was hardly unique among prior âgenerations of poets.â But for Eliot, it was intolerable, for one thing, because that outsider-y sense reeked of mewling Romanticism; for another, he âwanted a classical coherence of the individual with [Christian] society,â a desire that drove him to relocate to an England he hoped (wrongly) would be different from the vulgar commercialism of the United States. Even there, though, there never was (and still isnât) such a thing as a Christian society, and the only way such a thing could come about was by doing away with âthe individual personality⊠because it was tainted with heterodoxy and multiplicity.â3 In producing his work, then, for Eliot it seems that a great poet will essentially purge himself of everything that makes him a feeling human.
It was Hamburgerâs quotation, though, of a passage of Eliotâs essay âTradition and the Individual Talentâ that hammered home how terrifying such an undertaking sounds, and how far the poetâs aim of depersonalization went. âPoetry,â he said there, âis not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion; it is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality. But, of course, only those who have personality and emotions know what it means to want to escape from those things."4
We could haggle about how much wiggle room that âof courseâ and what follows it allows. But it wasnât just a matter for Eliot of taking the uncertainties and embarrassments, discomforts and pain involved in being the âpersonalityâ you were and sublimating them into something readers could identify with, or at least appreciate, as belonging to the wider world. It was a matter of escaping all those things altogether, of wanting from the get-go and in general to get away from them. An all-encompassing and more disciplinarian version of a tear-filled (and even untrue in the moment) declaration that âI wish it would all go away,â or the driving force behind the grief-stricken patients of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, thinking life will be easier if they just wipe from memory that which unsettles them. But even in those couple of examples, the desire to escape is from the aftermath of a particular botched or unfortunate situationânot from emotion and personality tout court.
Itâs understandable that Eliot wanted nothing to do with navel-gazing drivel; I could relate it to the contemporary frustration of coming across employee surveys in which respondents assert they just want to be âcelebratedâ at work âfor who they are.â (In that latter case, my rejoinder would be that you could celebrate me not via empty effusions regarding my âdiversity dimensions,â but via real healthcare, a bullshit-free work environment that does not demand useless hours of butt in seat and de facto never being off the clock, and letting me do my job without requiring my private life bleed into or be sacrificed to it). But it didnât seem enough to Eliot to approach poetry and poetic creation differently from one particular, historically situated âschool;â according to Hamburger, he seemed to want to turn poetry, and through it, all of worthwhile life, into ascetic existence, one that âdemanded sacrifice not only of self-love, but of love and sympathy for all the grosser manifestations of humanity.â5 The sort of feeling Iâve gotten from reading Eliot does indeed make it seem like his work and his demands go beyond the decreation of self described not only by Simone Weil, eager as she was to lose herself in Godâs love, but also and especially by all those medieval mystics who, even in hoping to empty themselves so God could enter, were super-sensual, often outright erotic, in their imaginings of what that might entail. As Simon Critchley said of them and of mysticism in general, the surrender of self involved was all âabout the possibility of ecstatic life.â6 For Eliot, I get the sense that ecstasy, or anything related to it, would have been distastefulâembarrassing.
Critchley does include Eliot in his discussion of mysticismâand although he doesnât place the poet in the club of mystics, he seems much more sympathetic to him, is better able than I to find a breathing shred of humanity in him. Whereas I (and it seems Hamburger) see an off-putting snob, Critchley looks on the poet as someone in search of âa stillnessâŠ. a condition which is closer to music.â7 And after all, Eliot, who probably wouldâve been driven batty by Simone Weilâs theatricality and, well, feeling, wrote a pretty admiring, if well-balanced, preface to her The Need for Roots. All the same, I get a chill when reading the entirety of the essay Hamburger quoted from. Even as Eliot makes a good argument there for why we canât just trash tradition, and why tradition must and does grow and change as the present uses and contributes to it, thereâs always his insistence on âThe progress of an artistâ as âa continual self-sacrifice, a continual extinction of personality,â which he illustrates by describing how sulphurous acid results from placing âa bit of finely filiated platinum... into a chamber containing oxygen and sulphur dioxide.â The platinum, which represents the depersonalized artist, sticks around, and thereâs none of it contained in the brand-new substance (the poem). Well thatâs all fine and dandy, but that new substance is corrosive (even if less so than sulfuric acid). Eliotâs kind of poet might be âseparat[ing]⊠the man who suffers and the mind which creates,â but whatever that mind is creating might best be kept at a good distance. He talks in the essay about âthe enjoyment of poetry,â but when he wraps up his treatise on poetry as escape from emotion by asserting that heâs really just providing âpractical conclusions as can be applied by the responsible person interested in poetry,â you wonder what enjoyment could even mean under these circumstances.8 How is one responsibly interested in poetry, for example? That sounds about as funâor meaninglessâas insisting to phone-addicted sixth graders that they will love Lucretius, because youâve told them they must love Lucretius.
Iâm not finished with Hamburgerâs book, and I hope my lack of âobjectivityâ hasnât preemptively tainted his arguments for anyone who has yet to read him. I also want to note that Hamburgerâs not condemning Eliotâs work, nor is he failing to note the changes and developments that work underwent. Finally, Iâll grant that Eliot (or many a real critic) wouldnât even take the time to sneer at my not-informed-enough position. But boy, did it feel grand to have one of those real critics back up the mere feeling-and-emotion-laden response Iâve always had to the work of a literary giant.
1. Eliotâs criticism, though, is another, unpuzzling matter, and I read his essays with interest, even if he and I would likely not come to the same conclusions about or share the same appreciation for any number of things. Even though I donât share his love for Pound or Eliot, Hugh Kennerâs The Pound Era is absolutely magnificent. Guy Davenportâs prose is a little tougher to swim through, but many an essay in his The Geography of the Imagination make evident why someone might go for Eliot and his compatriots, while not being pretentious at all.â©
2. If youâve read any twentieth-century German literature in English translation, youâve likely read Hamburgerâs workâand brilliant, serious, unsentimental work it was. Michael Hamburger, The Truth of Poetry: Tensions in Modern Poetry from Baudelaire to the 1960s (Penguin, 1972), 140.â©
3. Hamburger, 139, 139, 140, 140.â©
4. Eliot in Hamburger, 140.â©
5. Hamburger, 142.â©
6. Simon Critchley, Mysticism (New York Review Books, 2024), 5.â©
7. Critchley, 9, 10.â©
8. T. S. Eliot, âTradition and the Individual Talent,â in Selected Prose, ed. John Hayward (Penguin, 1963), 25, 26, 26, 26, 29.â©